- Doesn't have much of an argument
- Too much background on the main character
- Not enough explanation of who the character they are playing is and why
B: 5/10
- Not enough actual blocking
- Only explained where people were, not enough on the actual act they performed
C: 2/5
- Grammatical errors
- Too much information, not enough buildup
- Moves from one topic to another too fast
- Repetitive
- Isn't clear with who they are playing
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